Bitter Sweet

Your beauty is what drives my heart crazy

For the sun don’t shine

When I’m without you

Walking along that narrow road alone

Dark and cold

Forever we will be separated

Not knowing what could have happened

The touch of a sweet soul

Is what brings me back into reality

That nothing I say or do

Will make you believe my love is true 

Reviews

[Plagued Monumentally]

You found out my soft spot! Romantic poems are always what makes me smile. This was a good write, maybe just a little cheesy and cliche. Put like I have said before, isn't all love cliche?

I felt your vulnerable side a little bit throughout this short poem and I thought it was what made this poem beautiful. Anyways, excellent write, keep up the good work and keep sending me read requests!

[Meghan]

What a beautiful, heartfelt poem. Good write! Thank you for sharing.

[Seashell]

You speak here as if you have experienced the situation. I hope not and that you had a happy ending.
Thanks
xx

[AJM]

Nice poem with heartfelt sentiment. I would say as the author Kevin MacNeil says "The best songs are bittersweet". Too right they are.

[freelancejouster]

this is so short and sweet, i do adore it.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

This is so much more colorful than anything of yours I've read before. :) I love it. Less literal, more surreal...it feels more fleshed out, like it's more three-dimensional than some of the others.

[brenda]

sweet write wel bittersweet like the tittle says !:) i wish you like always good luck on this !:)

[Midori]

this is a vary simple poem but vary sweet. Its easy to understand. I like it

[J.e.s.s.i.c.a]

This is short, but sweet. I like it =)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem of love and desire. Life is luck and good timing. A wise man will wait and be kind for the good things in a life. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote