To The Newly Weds

To my Dad and new Step Mom :) love you both

Days when you thought you were alone

Days when you thought no one cared

Days when you thought you had nothing to do

Have finally come to an end

You now have someone by your side

To love and to hold you close in the times of need

You now have someone you know is true

And would never leave your side

You’ve finally found the perfect match

The one God chose for you

 

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

short and sweet and well chosen words. lovely.

[Cancelled]

Aw! That was really sweet! Loved it! You are a great writer!

[Seashell]

This is beautiful. Glad your Dad has a new someone to share the rest of his life with. Circumstances allow these wonderful things to happen.
Good luck to them
and you for sharing your joy
Babs xx

[Lively]

Good...

[Lindsey]

Its wonderfully beautiful and lovely. I like it.

[brenda]

beutiful and sweet poem love it :)

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Thanks for the help revising it but I slept on it and though i would keep it as it is.

[Coyote Poetry]

The days when you thought your were alone.
The days and nights you thought no-one cared.
The long day you search for a reason to be alive and strong.
Have finally came to a close.
A special woman stand by your side.
Her love and desire to hold you is strong.
You are not alone for love had brought two hearts together.
She is standing by your side.
You have find a perfect woman.
The one God choose for you.
I like your version. I hope your father and his new soon to be bride find happiness and a good life together. He is lucky to have a son who cared and loved his father. A excellent poem.
Coyote