The Rebirth of Something New

When I think about stopping

My flesh drags me back under

I try to serve the one who truly care

I seem like a normal guy

But deep down I’m a sinner

I pray for salvation

But I never seem to bother

My lowdown soul

I try to fade away from the old

But my flesh drags me back under

Some day’s I feel as low as low can go

But Jesus brings me back up

And I feel like a new man

The rebirth of something new

Now I pray for salvation

And everything seems to change

I feel like reading the word

And taking up my cross daily

I feel like leading the faded into reality

Showing them a brand new start

The start of something new

When it seems like the end pray and you shall recieve

Author's Note

Take up your cross daily. Remember "For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life." John 3:16

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

i am in no position to review religious writes

[brenda]

nice !:) love this !:)

[Lindsey]

I enjoyed reading the true honesty of this. Very well done please continue :)

[deeps]

There is so much truth in this. I really liked.
I love the authors note. Wonderful verse.

[Coyote Poetry]

Ain't easy to do the right things always. A wise person learn from their mistakes and try not to repeat the same error again. Prayer and hope is a good thing. Thank you for a strong poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote