Can't Make up my Mind

My heart says yes

But my mind says no

I look you in the face

You didn’t break my heart

I broke my own

By being tempted by your beauty

I don’t like being mean

To the people I love the most

Even though I really like her

I wouldn’t last a month

Reviews

[Seashell]

heart and mind = 2 different solutions.....heart always wins...be prepared for the breaking of it of course...then let it heal and move on only to realise the person we thought we knew so well was an a*s... So all in all...we are really filled with wisdom...at the end of the day....ha !

good stuff
thanks
Babs x

[freelancejouster]

there's something very honest and sweet about this. quaint.

[Meghan]

This is sad!!!! But it is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. Good Job!

[Coyote Poetry]

A wise man listen to his heart and mind. Sometime our instinct is more wise then our common sense. Your words were direct and honest. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lindsey]

This is sad but a very good writing and a wonderful read. I like it.

[brenda]

no no getting self esteem down ! this is not allowed lets just see what happens :)