Even Though We Just Met

Even Though We Just Met

A Poem by Matthew Ryan Hardy
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theres this girl i just met on Facebook that goes to my school. and we are talking about meeting at school really soon and i really like her.

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Even though we just met,

I think that you are a really beautiful girl,

I would like to get to know you better,

Meeting you for the first time I was really nervous,

Why you ask,

Wouldn’t you be nerves to met someone as cute as you,

Life goes on no matter what,

If you aren’t interested I will be sad,

And hard for me to move on,

Even though we just met,

I feel like I’ve know you forever

© 2011 Matthew Ryan Hardy


Author's Note

Matthew Ryan Hardy
theres this girl i just met on facebook that goes to my school. and we are talking about meeting at school really soon and i really like her. the first time i seen a picture of her, i couldn't stop thinking about her, but I'm not really sure shes interested in me.... so i was thinking maybe if i give her this she might start to like me :) hope it works

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Well, I can't speak for her, but I would love this poem if I got it! There're a few typos you might want to correct first, though--"nerves" is "nervous" and in line seven I'm pretty sure it should be "life" instead of "like." Good work, though. It seems very genuine and heartfelt.

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This was such a cute poem, and I know these are the exact words that girl would love to hear. Even if you've just met. You really captured it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

She just might. It is a piece of your heart. Always worth a try, then no regrets. Couple of tips in the 6th line nerves should be nervous and the last line should read known. Good luck!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, I can't speak for her, but I would love this poem if I got it! There're a few typos you might want to correct first, though--"nerves" is "nervous" and in line seven I'm pretty sure it should be "life" instead of "like." Good work, though. It seems very genuine and heartfelt.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

theres only few guys who actually do this for a girl i guess your one of them she will love it:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Matthew Ryan Hardy
Matthew Ryan Hardy

Roseville, MI



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