Even Though We Just Met

Even Though We Just Met

A Poem by Matthew Ryan Hardy
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theres this girl i just met on Facebook that goes to my school. and we are talking about meeting at school really soon and i really like her.

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Even though we just met,

I think that you are a really beautiful girl,

I would like to get to know you better,

Meeting you for the first time I was really nervous,

Why you ask,

Wouldn’t you be nerves to met someone as cute as you,

Life goes on no matter what,

If you aren’t interested I will be sad,

And hard for me to move on,

Even though we just met,

I feel like I’ve know you forever

© 2011 Matthew Ryan Hardy


Author's Note

Matthew Ryan Hardy
theres this girl i just met on facebook that goes to my school. and we are talking about meeting at school really soon and i really like her. the first time i seen a picture of her, i couldn't stop thinking about her, but I'm not really sure shes interested in me.... so i was thinking maybe if i give her this she might start to like me :) hope it works

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Well, I can't speak for her, but I would love this poem if I got it! There're a few typos you might want to correct first, though--"nerves" is "nervous" and in line seven I'm pretty sure it should be "life" instead of "like." Good work, though. It seems very genuine and heartfelt.

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really really nice i feel your fear of rejection something we all feel it's cute and honest and i love it :)

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Beautiful

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Beautiful, I hope it works out well. Thank you for the poem..

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is really cute. I'd like it, but I'd warn you to be cautious. Of course, that's just me.

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sorrowfully sweet beautfifully sad such truthful sweet words you have used to capture ur readers attensions and you have done it well

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If she doesn't start to like you after reading this, I think she's crazy. I'd love it if someone wrote me something like this. Good work (:

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Poetry can break down doors and allow you into good places. World is scary. Always good to know people and hope they are real and honest. I like the gentle and polite poem of hope and friendship. A excellent poem.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


If she does start liking you after you wrote this...... Then somethings wrong with her. Its filled with love and admiration. Well done

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did you give her the poem? and what did she say?!!:)

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Thanks everyone i cant wait to meet her shes letting me go to her tennis match


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Added on April 10, 2011
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Matthew Ryan Hardy
Matthew Ryan Hardy

Roseville, MI



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