Forgiveness

As my love comes to an end,

I’m glad to see your face,

Looking at me for the first time,

Saying how you didn’t know I meant everything I said,

Asking for forgiveness,

I just look away,

I’ve been through a lot in the past,

Not knowing what the future brings,

I can’t even picture you and me

By Matthew Hardy

 

March 18, 2011

Reviews

[The Trapped Angel]

Forgiveness
Why do we need it
We ask for it
but are unwilling to share that joy
It is the ultimate test
One given from above
But in time
You will learn to receive and share it
Even if your wings are tattered and torn
It is one thing that with time
Can be the ultimate gift
To any soul

[Coyote Poetry]

Forgiveness is hard for us to give. Sometime time is the only healer. In the end we must forgive to be able to move on. Life lessons are hard and many. Better to give a hug and kiss on the forehead. Thank them for the good and bad lessons of love. I like the complete poem. I like how you ended the excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[freelancejouster]

...it's kind of lumpy. i like the idea behind it, the images it brings, but they're forced. i think with a little organization that this could be brilliant, piercing, powerful.