Nothing Else Fades

As the sun fades away,

The moon comes into play,

The darkness covers the land,

There is a small light in the distance,

Where there is a man sitting down to pray,

He speaks about when the world comes to an end,

Everyone will be gone,

Except the unsaved souls,

God is who I want,

No one else will do,

He is my lord and savior,

And I will live for him

Reviews

[Angela]

Rich with faith.

[Thea Fuentebella]

thought-provoking...definitely:)

[.shalynn.009.]

I love the imagery. The fact that you focused in on what the speaker is seeing, then progressed to what he is feeling was a great way to express your joy in your faith. It's nice to see someone who can write writing about something that means so much about them (also nice to read somethign about a subject other than love. It's interesting.) Clearly, your faith is very importan to you, and I loved the last line. Sums up the way many people want to feel, the way a lot of people do feel. Nicely done.

[Madison A. Wright]

very well written.. i can see the image as i read ur poem!

[fatalsymphonies]

A pleasant flow, "And I will live for him". a good message. strong.

[dukovan]

i find myself seeing this, just try to take this perspective for a minute. When its all given up, unbiased, free, and accepted. You start to see that the absolute love, of everything here, all these people, from far enough away it is everything. Think about that, from far enough away you can see everything, also from far enough away, everything become one thing. You are part of this one thing, we were made in Gods image he says, we are God, it all is. All at once. To serve God, is to serve it all.

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

great poem Matt :) cant wait t read more of your great works!

[(Loveless)]

wonderufuly spirtual an i like how u speak about god =) lovely

[diannesam]

excellent poem, it has a really good flow to it.

[MandaBear]

A excellent poem.