I love you

I really don't know at this point what i should do. whenever i'm around her i get this felling, mixed with good and bad. good on the side that i could have someone that I've trusted for a while now.

I want to tell you,

But can’t find the right words,

You are very cute,

Words are harder to say to you,

Where can I find these words?

At this point words don’t matter to me,

They're just letters,

Mixed up to mean something,

Letters that you can turn into so many words,

The simplest of words,

I love you,

Everyone wants to hear,

Before they go to bed at night,

The words I want to say to you every time you are down,

The words I want to say to you whenever I see you,

I love you

Reviews

[GamingGal]

Pros: Cute little idea here. A bit cliche, but everything is getting that way these days. After all, there are only so many topics to write about. I can sense your love for her. An innocence. It's nice.

Cons: You used the wrong "there" in the seventh line. It should be "they're"

Overall: Good job :)

[Lindsey]

just beautiful