Beauty

Beauty is only one word of many to describe you,

Beauty means so many things,

Standing out as beautiful as a flower,

On a early spring morning,

Blooming for the first time.

Reviews

[john-paul cosentino]

matt, i think that this is a nice piece. romantic, heartfelt, and honest.
i just wish you went a little further with it. show us more...another words show us in imagines how lovely she is and what she means to you.

i also like that you go to church. are you a Baptist/Pentecostal/ etc?

-johnpaul

[.shalynn.009.]

I like this, and that ending line was absolutely beautiful, but it feels incomplete. You say there are many meanings for the word, but you only give one. Perhaps if you showed beauty in other ways, with other metaphors. Maybe you could have each metaphor stand for a different aspect of the person the poem is describing. Just a suggestion. I think you could go further with what is already a lovely little piece.

[M.Babu]

This is a sweet, sentimental poem. Beautiful cannot be the same to all and your own unique description brings out how you feel it. Too short though the ending came too suddenly. Keep writing

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

She liked it :)

[(Loveless)]

this really is special an sweet poem I like but i guess beauty comes in many different forms an is different for everyone. Im likein this poem though keep up the gud work =)

[freelancejouster]

the idea behind this is strong and wonderful, but you don't do anything with it. what and who is this beauty who means so many things? tell us the things!

[howlfjdks]

I love the simple kindness this poem gives. Beauty goes through rebirths many times in ones life. It's the knew discovery of beauty that takes time to find.

[MandaBear]

wonderful. I like it a lot.

[Lindsey]

beautifully wounderful. I like it a lot.

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

To someone that I like at my church