Ever Before

I’ve never met this girl before; I’ve seen her but never talked to her. I wrote this for her, and come to find out she has a boy friend, ok that’s ok.

I have never met you before,

Ever since I laid my eyes on you,

I was slain,

Your beauty stands out,

Brighter than the stars in the night sky,

I want to get to know you,

My looks aren’t great,

Poetry is what finishes me,

A couple simple words is all it takes,

I love you……

Reviews

[GamingGal]

Pros: Aww, how sweet. Love at first sight kind of thing. And being a distant admirer is always cute. I like the line "Poetry is what finishes me" It's just so poetic and pretty. I like the flow of this poem and the emotion in it. I can imagine you reading this with eyes downcast and a quiet voice, muttering the last line. Don't be afraid to approach her! Even if she has a boyfriend, I'm sure she'd be flattered.

Cons: None

Overall: A cute poem, and the first of my many read requests! What a great way to start them off :)

[dukovan]

"poetry is what finishes me" i really really like that line.

[MandaBear]

thats soo sweet. any girl would be lucky to hear this. i know i would love to hear this from a sweet guy. You have a heart and you cant say that about many guys these days. Good job and great work :)