Love Coaster

Love is like a roller coaster,

Changing all the time,

My love for you is up and down,

Not thinking about what will happen next,

When you’re nice and sweet,

My love builds up,

But when you’re mean and cruel,

My love is torn back down

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Words said in anger and hate can separate people forever. A lot of wisdom in your poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[.shalynn.009.]

A nice little poem. The simile is a bit...cliche, though. But I suppose it's a cliche for a reason. It flowed well, and ended nicely, with no real solution. A nice description of the speaker's love, with a bit of a conflict, but no offered conclusions. Sweet and fun to read. I hope you show these little pieces to the girl your dating, if you are dating anyone. She would appreciate that you have talent for expressing your emotions through poetry.

[howlfjdks]

There is strength in love for if it is true a person stays through the light and dark.

[GamingGal]

Pros: Good little comparison

Cons: I disagree. To see why, read my poem "Rocks and Hard Soil" It basically sums up my opinion.

Overall: Interesting take. Too bad I'm biased and disagree.

[freelancejouster]

this is a creative metaphor which i quite enjoy. nice work :)

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is a cute way to describe your love good piece

[Lindsey]

I agree and dissagree. It is good thought I liked it!

[MandaBear]

awwww very nice. i cant imagine a girl not liking this you are an awesome writer