Time to Move On

By the end of me thinking of you

It’s time to move on,

This time it won’t be hard,

I will always remember,

You deep in my heart,

You were a really nice person,

There by my side,

Nothing can change the way,

I have placed you in my mind.

Author's Note

I'm not sad in this one I'm happy that she is happy... (:

Reviews

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

It's good to be able to easily move on when you've realized that it isn't going to work out; it's even better when you are happy for their happiness and keep the good memories in your mind, instead of the pain or anger you might have felt about losing said person. Good write and very uplifting about a love that didn't work out.

[Coyote Poetry]

We will remember the good people who made us laugh and stood with us awhile. I like the feel and emotion of this poem. In the end all we have is memories. My Grandfather told me. "A man with a active and complete life can look back and be thankful." A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jessica Samuelsen]

very gracious of you....

[freelancejouster]

the repetition of 'time' between the first and second line seems kind of awkward. the same goes for the way 'you' starts both the fourth and fifth line. i like the idea of this poem, but not really it form.

[MandaBear]

i am glad you are happy matt. its nice to know their is a guy out in the big world that is happy even though they didnt get the relationship they had hoped for. keep you head up high and i know you will find someone that really connects wiht you. =)

[HoorayForUnderdog]

This is the definition of real love -- that one can be happy that the other is happy despite the loss of the relationship.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

good read

[Lindsey]

Great! It's asy to read an enjoyable to read.

[E.H. Monroe]

ya got the young love thing going on...thats for sure.
what would I do?
done marry rhyme, cheapens what you are trying to say. Sure its sweet and short, but there is probably a ton of s**t that you still need to say and worked yourself into a corner and skipped som eof it.
try some expansion on for size