Can't move one

What I think now..

It didn't work out,
I cant move on,
She is so beautiful, 
I can't get her out of my head,

My mind is a blur, 

With her image right there, 

Her voice I still here,

Saying how sweet and how kind,

She said I'm a sweet guy, 

But words still hurt me, 

Thats all I have to say.

This came from the heart, I know its not good but I wrote it with what every I was thinking...

Reviews

[howlfjdks]

Stay true to yourself what flows out of a human soul is poetry it is you your interpretation of the world and how you see the world. I enjoy your poem. You have had to feel this pain for me to see the beauty in the love you felt. An honorable display of emotions. Write on!

[Disillusioned]

Sometimes, the quality of a poem lies within the sincerity and not the meter or rhyme. It was felt in the heart, as from whence it came.

[Elizebeth Brooks]

You wrote with so much sadness, and believe me dear, I feel you on this one and where you're coming from. Some things just happen for a reason, whether we like to believe that or not. You can get through it. :-) You wrote another beautiful piece of work again. Great job. :-)