Feeling of Love

Love between two is the conformation of feelings

Strongest feeling

The Longest to perfect

Yet the easiest to be destroyed

Love can build someone up

But still bring someone down

 

If you are in love

Hold that flame out proudly

Everyone is truly looking for love

Give them something to hope for

Something to look at proudly

And to have something to build up too 

Reviews

[misha]

Lovely poem =) Great write!

[MandaBear]

I couldn't agree more! Great job Loved the poem so much

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your words. Love is give and take. We must listen and pay attention to our number two. Hard work to keep love strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Revolutionary]

great meesage well written beautiful words