Confidences

Just something that I'm feeling on my heart.

Beauty comes in many shapes and forms

But I believe that yours masters them all

I’ve never laid my eyes on someone

That literally had a glow

 

Every single day that you cross my mind

I pray that one day you will be mine

It’s kind of weird to seem so confident

But I really feel that there’s something great coming out if it

 

Now I wrap this thing up with a single line or two

That I’m ready for a life spent with you

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

It's been at least a year since I read anything on here, but I remember your work and I can tell you've improved and gotten more experienced with your writing! It's hard for me to exactly describe how it's better, but it's just tighter--your words are more concise. I'm glad you've kept writing and I don't know if you like to look back at your previous work, but I bet you could see the change. I always like to go back and read my old stories, even though they often make me cringe!

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Thank you very much, and I've was told that about a week ago so I did go back and look at my old stuff and I can see how much my writing has changed since my first poem. I really apprieate this review.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Your words are true. Real wisdom is to know real beauty and appreciate the beauty. A very nice ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

So sweet!!

[Saumya]

goood work...!!