Dreams That Finally Come True

Ever seeing beauty

Is the truth behind your glow

Nothing else in existence can measure to your wondering flow

Days pass on by

While Night seem like years

For the priceless time with I wish to spend with you

One day in the distance future

Our hearts will finally meet

That day will last forever 

For I won the girl that was in my dreams

Reviews

[spiritwind]

a welcome inner sweetness to this poem

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of hope and love. Dreams can become reality if we are patience and open new doors with kindness and love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

This is very sweet! I really like it very much!

[Tabitha t]

this is very touching. the rhythm and rhyme is perfect and this is a very close to flawless poem