Tides

This is a poem that reflects the Tides of emotion we go through when seeking love. When dealing with love it is an emotional roller coaster. We are in a hurricane in the middle of the ocean..

TIDE

 

 

 

As time advances, Tithes exchange the tides erupt till seasons end.

In jest I’d never say your name but beckon you my dearest friend.

Till summers end and discontent of winters bitter sting I feel

 I do oblige and recognize the heart of loves alkalies  heal.

 

It is and will forever be a mystery to you and I

That when the gods do gaze upon ironically with envy eyes.

The vapor of a our lives remains the source of  pain and souls delight.

So why then we insist of and plead for misery and bitter nights.

 

Habitual, compulsion sets, to break the cycle is my goal.

For in my soul I know to well that love can fill this empty whole.

Dependency, necessity, does balance all the warmth I feel

And shall not rob me of this love, for nothing can un forge  this steel

 

The tides subside, the ocean swells, a silence sets in air so thick.

I cannot hide the fear I felt before the calm was torn to bits.

Now is the time to stand there strong just like the weeping willow tree.

For nothing will undo the bond and trust that she has put in me.

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I love this Matt because it shows that someone can be moved to change when they acknowledge unconditional love standing right in front of them. It's a hard thing to do and yet it's nice to see someone write a piece that says..he'd risk it all..the change to make his heart whole. Excellent write..xo

[Matt Daalling]

Thank you all for your comments. I am truly pleased that you have taken the time to read it.. I will keep them coming.

[Cherrie Palmer]

..I cannot hide the fear I felt before the calm was torn to bits... love that line
not to mention your- Habitual, compulsion- great use of words
loved it

[ImmoralAngel]

This is beautiful written I truly feel the depth in this poem. Love is much like the tides themselves calm and slow at times and overbearingly felt at other times. Very well done Mr.daalling ;-)

[ΨXO]

You got yourself a unique form of expressing your tendencies. Your use of more advanced words conforms very neatly and it's a nice treat. Good write, I'll be waiting for the day you are bestowed with the title of "Writer".

[Marie]

A good poem; conveys so much about the ocean and its tides.