Too soon

I sit in the propeller plane
Thinking of you
I feel so close to you now
Above the clouds

Could it be my childish image of heaven or the feeling of my mortality so close in this turbulence

When will you send me a rainbow, I silently wonder
My heart hopes you can find me
You're so small, only five.
Who is showing you the way now?

I turn my head and see the multitude of colours outside the window,
Descending from a cloud.
You heard me sweet Angel
And now i know you are safe

My heart breaks once more

Author's Note

All comments welcome

Reviews

[Gee]

Man that is sad, beautifully so.

[BBP]

very powerful and sweet.

I can relate to this feeling.

[Chris]

My softest condolences...

[Matilda 3000]

Thank you. The words don't feel like they are enough. But with loss I suppose they never will be. Thanks for taking the time to read and review all of my poems

[Chris]

you are welcome... take care now...

[MysteriousAries]

You enjoy making your readers think... And I love it... A very sad imagery you've just painted... your ending is quite a start of moving on... and hopefully it's the last heart breaks...

[Matilda 3000]

Thank you for your kind review:)

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Wow. My heart just broke. Beautifully written to evoke emotion. I love it

[Matilda 3000]

Thanks so much for the review