The Untitled Girl

When I fell in love with a stranger....

Come heal my burn of longing

quench my thirst of hungering desires

fill all voids, complete me,the puzzle

Your eyes are a maze where I am lost

your broad smile is a toxic drink

to forget who I am, forget all 

I wish to dive deep into your sea

dive just like the setting sun

I thirst, your sea quench......

Author's Note

Just on love.....

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

now that is deep enamored beauty~ adoration in each beautifully drawn line~

[Omar Fendri]

quench my thirst : reminds me by me my poem
nice one
well-done
Emotional and obvious spoken love :)

[Robin]

the promises of love ..

[Sonali]

completely passionate n a bit sensuous
fill all voids, complete me,the puzzle

Your eyes is a maze where I am lost
^ nice use os metaphors....conveys the depth of ur feelings.
feels good to read.
loved the line
I thirst, your sea quench......

It should be --Your eyes are a maze. thumbs up.:) passionate write.

[Bubo]

Romantic and passionate, forces such as the sea, the thirst, all bring a vivid picture.

[David W Moore III]

Dive just like the setting sun. Love that visual. Great imagery. Very plaintive. The passion is evident!