The Untitled Girl

When I fell in love with a stranger....

Come heal my burn of longing

quench my thirst of hungering desires

fill all voids, complete me,the puzzle

Your eyes are a maze where I am lost

your broad smile is a toxic drink

to forget who I am, forget all 

I wish to dive deep into your sea

dive just like the setting sun

I thirst, your sea quench......

Author's Note

Just on love.....

Reviews

[RonnieBreight]

I like this because it's so sweet. And up at the top where it says it was when you fell in love with a stranger, that just makes it all the better. Good job.

[Laura]

I love this! everything said in it is sooooo romantic! its amazing

[Moonflower]

' your eyes are a maze'....I love the language and imagery here, amazing piece.

[Matthew Kult]

You had me all the way to the last line. I don't know why, but it doesn't seem...I don't know. It doesn't seem to fit.

...the setting sun
reflecting it's beauty, your beauty

I love the rest, so romantic. So wondeful.

With Love,

Jaidyn

[Vivek Koshy]

........you my friend are a romantic to the core!!!

[Ann John]

Ohhhhhhhh.... So sweet....... Romantic. I have fallen for this words. This one is so romantic.

[StoryPosterShane]

Romantic....i like it...good job :D

[Lilly]

a passionate poem. nice images/descriptions
well done

[Shiela]

Romantic write. Loved this. Good job.

[Madame Mystique]

Hey Matthews :)
Nice poem nice flow and great words.
Only one little correction:
"Your eyes are a maze where I am lost" Other than that very nice written :D