The Untitled Girl

When I fell in love with a stranger....

Come heal my burn of longing

quench my thirst of hungering desires

fill all voids, complete me,the puzzle

Your eyes are a maze where I am lost

your broad smile is a toxic drink

to forget who I am, forget all 

I wish to dive deep into your sea

dive just like the setting sun

I thirst, your sea quench......

Author's Note

Just on love.....

Reviews

[Sara]

Wow, this is very sweet. I like your symbolism. The diction is very unique as well as compelling. I enjoyed this poem. Keep writing, you're very talented.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Sweet and captivating.. Awesome write

[Zackery Alan Daley]

I get this to the max. Short and sweet but I relate to it easy, and it is epic s**t. Good piece keep it up.

[Victor P Vigil Jr]

Awesome!!!!

[Rachel]

oh boy...... such romantic power. well written with a pen filled with ink of love. good job.

[Shivi]

Reminds me of my wonderland tales :). Nice one

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Drink up, my friend. It is good for the soul.

[No regret]

Amiazing ,,, Nicely told . great !!

[Brad]

somebody's got it bad! hahahahaha...
oh, brother, i've swam in that same ocean and there are nothing but white caps...beautifully lost in that fathomless sea

[Ruth]

I LOVE the last stanza love, wohoo lol
Blew me away, the strangest of emotions can be stirred through a stranger, we can almost be ourselves with a stranger, sounds odd, but true! lol
Great poem!
xx