The Wicked Sky

Anyone has their shades of grey... Then why not for sky??

  Sky may seduce a million poets

  Not me, not anymore. I saw

  thine wicked smile, grey clouds of mind

  I hate the sky, thee bury heaven

  I hate, thee hide my dead beloved

 when the clouds pass, remember them.

Author's Note

For all who lost their beloved....

Edited by Dinesh.

Reviews

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. because when we look up at the sky ... it's always smiling ... and its shades of grey always make it more beautiful ... and the vastness of the sky is always inspiring ... when i look at the sky ... i feel happy ... that all the people i am connected to ... especially poets ... especially in the cafe ... are looking at the same sky ... the sky's the sky ... that's why ... and i did lose a very dear friend ... in a tragic road accident ... but he twinkles in the stars ... and shines in the sun ... :) ...

question the questionable
question the doubt
don't question the question
or it'll be a rout

[Sara]

Wow, this is really good, and I enjoy the idea of someone who isn't fascinated with such things as clouds. Very good.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

The pain can distort such beauty into murkiness. I've always thought of the sky as heavenly, divine... until now. In such few words you hurt is conveyed with an astounding roar. Very well done.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

I liked the idea...Sky that hides someone you beloved, good idea though...this was a sad poem, a sound of hopelessness convene cleverly withing this write...good...

$ your info, I hate clouds too...I never believe in anything...anymore...this was deeply connected with me...

[Moonflower]

Lovely write.

[NovaKai]

nicely written, very true

[Jess Quna]

It's short but it works,
it's easy to understand and easy to relate to.
Good one, keep it up
Greetings,

Sarah

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

the sky is like a huge visual of emotions...anyways, this is a nice poem

[nono]

Nicely done because this is true!!!!

[Brad]

the sky has biblically been spoken of as the "great veil", this has a bitter undertone that i really relate to

[Ed Hart]

"thine"?..."thee"?