The Wicked Sky

Anyone has their shades of grey... Then why not for sky??

  Sky may seduce a million poets

  Not me, not anymore. I saw

  thine wicked smile, grey clouds of mind

  I hate the sky, thee bury heaven

  I hate, thee hide my dead beloved

 when the clouds pass, remember them.

Author's Note

For all who lost their beloved....

Edited by Dinesh.

Reviews

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. because when we look up at the sky ... it's always smiling ... and its shades of grey always make it more beautiful ... and the vastness of the sky is always inspiring ... when i look at the sky ... i feel happy ... that all the people i am connected to ... especially poets ... especially in the cafe ... are looking at the same sky ... the sky's the sky ... that's why ... and i did lose a very dear friend ... in a tragic road accident ... but he twinkles in the stars ... and shines in the sun ... :) ...

question the questionable
question the doubt
don't question the question
or it'll be a rout

[Leanne Conway]

I personal think, THIS POEM IS MEAN TO CLOUDS!!! Clouds make me smile, I see big fluffy balls of COTTON CANDY!!! XD Love the poem honey, It was beautiful, Also, Check my photos, That looks like one I have taken of the clouds for photography class.

[Victor P Vigil Jr]

I love clouds and this poem sadden me. Good job! I like.

[Ruth]

A great piece!
I can identify with that!
A thing of beauty can become the gravest of images, depending on beliefs, I guess, great poem!xx

[Bubo]

Such a thought, that the sky hides heaven........and once something loved now resented........beautiful.

[Laura]

Wow! that is really good.

[No regret]

Loosing someone is worst part of life ,,,,u made me thinking of those who left humans world n who left my world .... hats off

[The Cute 1]

i love it

[Sweets]

That's a great poem.
I loved it.
Very touching.
Short and full of meaning.
Great job ! :D

You can see the enchantment you cast with your words going a different route to every old "Lovey" poet that would write about the perfect sky and the perfect ending- well life jsut aint fair and i think you show a good realism here by saying that. Good work keep it up!

[JaceJordd]

awwh i love this(: