The Wicked Sky

Anyone has their shades of grey... Then why not for sky??

  Sky may seduce a million poets

  Not me, not anymore. I saw

  thine wicked smile, grey clouds of mind

  I hate the sky, thee bury heaven

  I hate, thee hide my dead beloved

 when the clouds pass, remember them.

Author's Note

For all who lost their beloved....

Edited by Dinesh.

Reviews

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. because when we look up at the sky ... it's always smiling ... and its shades of grey always make it more beautiful ... and the vastness of the sky is always inspiring ... when i look at the sky ... i feel happy ... that all the people i am connected to ... especially poets ... especially in the cafe ... are looking at the same sky ... the sky's the sky ... that's why ... and i did lose a very dear friend ... in a tragic road accident ... but he twinkles in the stars ... and shines in the sun ... :) ...

question the questionable
question the doubt
don't question the question
or it'll be a rout

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Yes, I am too stoned to remember the correct grammar to describe the contrasts used, so here is a simplified review: I loved how you used Old English, almost Shakespearean in style, as well as the way you mention how the sky influences so many poets...good, great, terrible, experimental, but they all seem to be about love or how things are going to work out. This piece challenges that cliche to the fullest, and in my opinion is an astounding, short and sweet read that can be published or place in a contest. Well done my friend, keep the flow steady as always.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Great write

[YouoweYoupay]

Nice concept, very diffferent from how most poets view it. The sky doesnt alway have to be a source of inspiration, serenity, or joy. It has a gloomy shade to it too. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

-Wella.

[Lilly]

I like the concept here. Powerful piece. Nice work.

[Vivek Koshy]

its sad......but its a cycle you cant stop.

..though Kalidas is going to be very dissapointed. ;)

[Shiela]

really good job. a new fresh concept. i have always loved the sky but not anymore.

[Omar Fendri]

a wow ! The sky ! yeah that perfect beauty can enfold the ache and pain. Sky's wicked. That's so awe-inspiring. for me, this one was of the most heartfelt poems That i have read. Really powerful words, the hatred vocabulary, it was perfect :) i like it

[Shivi]

Short but sharp! It conveys a pain that stirs up your stomach for a min. Very deep.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Matthews,

A short poem full of strong emotion. The picture adds very well to the poem itself, excellent choice. I do have my shades of Grey, I do wish I could turn them to a pure white, but it would seem I am well past that.

Regards,

Matthew without the S