The Two Solus

A short story about addiction towards something.

A College life...
A boy was sitting in that silent corner of the library,talking nothing to anyone,listening to nothing else...,only just sees the words in that book he was reading...
At that time,a girl came near him and asked that,is that the book 'Secret'?
He looked up and shake his head...
She smiled and sit just opposite to him.They knew each other.They became friends.They shared their stories.
One day,the boy asked the girl,'i need someone to read for me,when i'm not able to...can you be that one?'Just a smile and that awesome word 'Yes'...
They both loved each other a lot...
They exchanged books,gifts and love...
2 years passed...Now he is reading the best book he had read so far...He was in a keen interest,and turned to the last page...The very moment he omit some blood,then a lot...The doctors told its the final stage of Cancer and no more hope.Suddenly she came and sat near to him with a painful heart and tearful eyes...
She cried a lot.He smiled at her and said that its his last few moments and i don't want you to see crying...And he tell her a wish that just like i said,i need you to read for me at the time i can't.He told her to take that book near by and read that last page for him.
She was broken with pain.She took the book and read that final page...Anxiety passed through his faces.Finally she said 'the end'.He showed a satisfacory smile and closed his eyes.She cried out and called him.,not opened.
She cried out...At his last few minutes,he doesn't ask her for a kiss,a hug,nothing like that...but want to complete his best book from his best one.He may be died hapily because two of his wishes came true.He showed 'love' another level...
He may be satisfied since the two things he was addicted to him was near to him at the time and the addiction continued till he breath for the last time...
Love is like a book...
For a good book,after each page we turn,we become more and more closer to it...just like Love...:)

Author's Note

Its my first writing.
A short story.
Accept my mistakes and please advise me.

Reviews

[Pratikshya Garabadu]

Overally it's a good one ...but there are some grammatical mistakes which you need to emphasise upon ....and don't forget to add your stories wid some essence ....lyk some suspense ...some romance and some adventures ...this is with ...how you can become a successful writer !!

[Mathew]

Can you please spare some time for me?
I need your help to be a better writer.