It's You.

It's You.

A Poem by Maskedthoughts
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When the only words that can sum it all up are I love you; but he's not ready to hear them.

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It's  12am and I'm sitting here emotions running high, 
Swirling inside my chest; like a current that just won't die. 
And I'm trying so damn hard not to tell you all I feel. 
I don't think you're ready for it all to be so real. 
I don't even know how to sum it all up, 
It's all threatening to burst out, like an overfilled cup. 
The words are jumbled, I can't think straight. 
Then I realize there are only three words that can describe how I feel 
It's as simple as I love you. 
It's as complicated as I love you. 
It's pounding hearts and soaring hopes. 
It's crashing waves and cracklings fires. 
It's all the beauty in the world stuffed in to my chest
It's looking at you and falling harder and harder each time. 
It's not being able to make this rhyme. 
It's your toffee skin and perfect smile. 
The way stories take you a while. 
It's a million things all trapped in one. 
It's the reason you are my sun. 
And you kiss my lips and it almost slips- I love you. 
Oh yes, yes I do. 

© 2015 Maskedthoughts


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As simple and complicated as I love you...Brilliant. Everything and more, so understand, but incomprehensible. It touches all senses and breathes life into us. All perfectly captured here. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Maskedthoughts

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words!
alifeacoustic

9 Years Ago

You're welcome :-)
It's You or Its gonna be you its all amazing! I enjoyed your read...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Maskedthoughts

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Years Ago

Welcome friend!
"It's as simple as I love you.
It's as complicated as I love you. " - I dont think Ive ever read truer words than these on this site MT.
This is a wonderfully heartfelt piece with enough whimsy to make it not make it very serious.
Well penned my friend.
Long time no see - I hope your well?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Maskedthoughts

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Yes I've had a writing hiatus unfortunately but I'm getting back to it. Hope you'.. read more
I can imagine this being recited in a movie or show honestly. This poem is really beautiful and has an alluring vibe all throughout it. Great work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Maskedthoughts

9 Years Ago

Wow thank you so much! That means a lot :)
Why is this poem not review until now
Beautiful poem
Great words just simple.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Maskedthoughts

9 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on May 7, 2015
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Tags: love, falling, in, scared, unrequited, emotions, poem, poetry, free, verse

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Maskedthoughts

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"As a writer if someone falls in love with my work, I know they have fallen in love with my mind. Having no idea what my face looks like, they chose my mind. Art may be the only place a women can hold.. more..

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