Hurricane

Stuttered sentences and broken words

I can’t be heard over the roar of our hurricane.

--It’s thrashing with want and need

Pulsing with passion and desire.

A fire sets in my stomach, spreading to my chest

Eyes locked bodies reaching

The hurricane swirls and crashes the nerves intrigue and lust together.

Churning pools of heated fantasy with pebbles of unease

Thrown back heads and ragged breaths

The winds whip around us pushing us together

The electricity crackles and burns between us.

My skin aches to feel yours

The water thumps down around us

Drenched we pull closer

Shivering with anticipation

My heart becomes a wild beast

Roaring with the winds

Your scent surrounds me

Your eyes swallow me

You inhale me I’m ready to be devoured

To be torn apart by the waves

Let me drown in you

Don’t rescue me you’re all I can see through the fog

The hurricane peaks it all closes in on me

 

Pulled under the surface into the heat

Pulled into the heart of it all

I’m set a light sinking and sinking

Until we are one

Drenched in you the water dries up

The wind dies down

I look up with clarity and realize baby you are my hurricane 

Author's Note

Not my strongest piece or the best structure. I'm still working on it but it's honest.

Reviews

[Steve87]

wow you was right about the structure but I love passion, sexual energy and content. Exciting stuff!

[ANTO]

You can't hornswoggle me MT - this is a whirligig of emotion and passion. Who needs structure when the writing is as steamy as this.
Okay - so you do need structure but you know what I mean...
Good one

[Maskedthoughts]

Wow thank you! :)

[Laura Lynn]

I had forgotten about hurricanes, such ferocious inspiration, aside from passion, I don't know how often we are to feel throughout life the way you describe here, a feeling we love of life, I wonder how often we should feel so and whether we attribute to the right people and places and things this passion

[Maskedthoughts]

Those are all good points! I think that for some people the hurricane is worth it

[Laura Lynn]

reading about it here, I believe yes it must be, I wouldn't mind being one myself, maybe you are this hurricane as well