Whispers

Whispered words
And heart felt glances
Hushed promises
And ravishing dreams

A set of heavy hearts
And clenching chests

A couple of minds
Trying to blur the lines

Two people parting ways
Going on their different days
Soon to be they will reunite
Until that time I cry through the night.

Hush, hush let's set our selves free
We will fly back when it's meant to be

Now off we go and off we see
Don't forget to remember me

It's in the night and through the day
In the tress and within the water
It's in the sun and out the moon
We will see each other soon.

KP

Author's Note

This poem is very personal and very dear to me. As I wrote it from the heart about something I recently went through. And just a side note I love for people to interpret my poems and take something from it. I love for people to find a piece of themselves in poetry because that's what I look for. But just a fun fact this one in fact is not about a guy.

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

What a whisper. It is not goodbye. jusqu'à ce que nous rencontrons à nouveau (french) means untill we meet again. Good Write and keep posting

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you!

[Arthur Henn]

Words written from the source of reality are always the best. This will hit home with many. Thank You for sharing an up close journey of your heart and soul.

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you for the review!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful, heartfelt and touching.
I feel like I went on a journey with you in this.
Wild guess, sounds like it was about your parents, am I right or wrong?
Anyway it was deep and fillled with strong emotion.
The best piece always come straight from the heart.
It shows in this piece.
Great write :)

[Maskedthoughts]

Thanks for the kind words! And you're close, it was about my sister and I.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Oh really. Im extremely close to my sister to.
Your welcome

[deleted]

Sorry you went through this. Nice writing!

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you and that's okay made me stronger!

[deleted]

Your welcome 😊

[Gee]

Like an ending to an illicit affair,lovers parting.Enjoyed this very much.

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you! :)

[ANTO]

I like the thread of destiny woven throughout this piece MT
The faith in the future. It offers hope
thanks for sharing

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you for taking something away from it and the kind words!

[Tony]

There is a lot of longing going on here-- you know like when you want to see someone special you can see them in the night and day, the water, the sun, and moon. Well that's how it moved me-- enjoyable imagery anyway it moves you:)

[Maskedthoughts]

I like how with poetry the every reader takes away something different, thank you for sharing what you felt from it. And thanks for the kind words :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Very well done.........
It's in the sun and out the moon
We will see each other soon................i liked this line very much and you have great imagine power.....

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you and that line is one of my favorites too :)

[KeeD]

This is very touching, has that ability to create longing for the reader as well.. it reminds us how the human heart works and how hope is such a powerful thing to have in life, a concept that one should hold on to and never give up on.

[Maskedthoughts]

thank you for your thoughts!