Forever

My lips are forever burned, from your touch.

My eyes will forever hold, your smoldering gaze.

My skin will forever react, to the sparks that fly in the nearness of you.

My heart will forever beat erratically in your presence.

My stomach will forever be filled with fields of butterflies, every time we speak.

My Mind will forever replay, our slice of utopia.  

My very being will forever, come alive at the thought of you. 

Author's Note

Feed back please! :) I don't usually write shorter pieces but I gave it a try this time..

Reviews

[ANTO]

I liked this - its repetitiveness is suited to this shorter piece - Im not too keen on such a small font - Id have went for a larger one to reflect that the subject would probably like to declare all - but on second thoughts the smaller font kind of indicates secrecy or the internal voice - go with your gut. just being devils advocate.

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you! It's actually funny you mention the font because i never change it or make it fancy. My goal is actually to start doing that so thank you :)

[ANTO]

The font, the image chosen, the 'headline' - some people include a song&video and finally the font all set the scene then your words complete the package - Its not possible to do this on paper but here - you can use all the tools at your disposal MT. or not -
Glad you feel I helped. :)

[Akcra]

Its very good. I am really moved by it and you have so much talent! :)

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you so much!

[audrie]

I really liked the way you translated every emotion with a physical response. . . It is true that emotions manifest themselves physically and you have captured this very well - keep up the good work

[Maskedthoughts]

thank you!

[CatT]

Beautiful poem. Very descriptive and lyrical!

[Maskedthoughts]

Thank you!