Finding My Way

I can't find peace anymore.

I'm a bright soul being sucked into a black hole,

My heart escapes me

My dreams erase me

The light is draining away

I'm so desperately trying to find my way.

....

A distant memory pure with happiness,

Tingles through me

Touching the parts that ache for that feeling once again.

The memory of that simplicity

Is liquid honey warming my veins

And jolting my mind awake.

   I'm lost, I've gone,

Its been too long.

I want to find my way back to liquid sunshine

and heavy light.

Reviews

[Arsh]

I like how creatively you express the strong feelings through poem. It's seemed worth reading. Liked the choice of words.

[audrie]

This makes me think about having nothing inside - hollow and empty. But it's beautiful

[Sam]

This piece is certainly melancholy, but hopeful too. Good job. Keep it up.