La Critique

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La Critique

© 2007 Mark Pearce

 

 

Yeah.

 

This ain’t as good a thing

As it should-ought to be.

 

It’s got no pounding chorus

Just a pronoun where a thought should be.

 

It uses perfect grammar

But the ‘jective is philosophy.

 

Oh yeah.

 

This piece it ain’t

As good as it should-ought to be.

Author's Note

Critique at your own risk.

Reviews

[W.k.kortas]

For what is syntax but deductions from the wages of sin? Light, clever, admirably tongue-in-cheek.

[Alexzan Marie]

I love this. It is brilliantly, blissfully innocent. But deep and thought provoking as well =)
It made me smile.

[Emily B]

'I only said the syntax and left the verb and the pronoun out. . .'

[Vanessa Whiteley]

This is delightful. Lovely humour.

[Lia]

I like it. Good work. Thanks xx

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This made me smile too. You are a clever, clever man. I dig your philosophy.
Light,
Siddartha