Girl with gray eyes

This is about my girlfriend

Her eyes were gray,
Strong like steel
Radiant like the stars,
Gateways into her soul.
I got lost in them
Like the were tunnels
I fell into them
I could feel every feeling
any human could feel
And saw everything
she had gone through
All of the graveyards
Of her broken prices
And the good parts
that kept her going.
And in this doing
of looking in to her eyes.
I knew
I was in love
Not just with her
But with her soul.

Author's Note

Is there anything I could do better. What do you think?

Reviews

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

Love the soul is the most pure love. the skin just cover the fears , but soul is naked and show the real feelings. Your poem is beauty, and teach the power of eyes. Looking at eyes the love found the eternal gate of a real love.

thanks for share this beauty poem. You have a good poet style.

[Mary]

This is about a girl with gray eyes who is very strong and dependent. She never showed weakness or emotions. That was until I came along and I just looked into her eyes and though they were to most beautiful things I have ever seen. But they weren't just beautiful they were meaning ful. They meant something's.