Worthless Dreams!

Staring at you while the heavy downpour continued

Couldn’t keep the track of the time as to when it flew

It felt like as if it was all starting over anew,

As usual I did cause issues go screw.

When the rain was done

Everything was over!

That it was all just a dream,

which was so near!

At times it feels like cursing the hell outta myself,

For always getting lost in his dreams like a hopeless,

Wish I was never in a relationship with him

Only then I might have gotta watch way better dreams…

But life never gives us the chance to choose,

as it gives us a lot of options so that we fail what to choose.

When the life is so cruel and evil

How can we expect human to be humble?

All we have to do is suffer like hell,

By leaving behind everything else!

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

You really express your feelings well. I can understand your emotions. Never regret something that once made you smile.

[T0TS]

I felt the helplessness in you poem and it was such a powerful emotion that conveyed from it...good stuff.

[Maryem Sumyta]

I am sorry to say that my fonts became a bit small by mistake. Hope you will ignore it 😊

[genaro pc]

I like the concept. I agree the font should be a little bigger, but it's a small detail.
Otherwise great poem! thanks :)

[Jen Walters]

One thing I think is clear, the type size needs to be bigger. I had to squint to read it, and normally my eyes are pretty easy going with font sizes. Otherwise this is a great free form poem, thanks for sharing this piece and have a wonderful day.

[Maryem Sumyta]

thank you everyone. :)