Hate My Life

Two bodies, single soul,
Wish one was mine and the other yours....
When we were so close to be one,
You backed out and all the efforts were gone.
As usual sun was shinning brightly,
I'm crying on my bed hugging my knees tightly.
I tried talking things out of the ant hole
You broke me into pieces
Could have sent me back simply as a whole.
Now that I'm leaving why aren't you?
Am I a toy to be played with or a tissue to use?
Dear god, please help me out,
Or tell, what reason am I being punished about?
Boy, you made me so strong and ruthless as stove,
That,
I hate love....
I hate life....
And i regret being alive...

Reviews

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I can relate to all you so spoke yet I hope it all has changed in time and you don't regret being alive. You spoke from the trueness of your heart when you felt all the pain that is never fake nor a forgotten wind:)

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Indeed it was heart touching...but I guess here after breaking up into pieces still you should have some hope...coz at last hope sustains life..no?!
Lovely read dear😊

[Maryem Sumyta]

Yes dear.. everyday brings new hopes to life ❤

[shardha sharma]

wow it's too good ! you are an amazing writer !

[Maryem Sumyta]

Thank you so much.

[Deepak Belbase]

This poem can make anyone believe that you had heartbreak. Wow! It's so damn good work of art. Full of sadness, cries & questions!

[Maryem Sumyta]

Thanks a lot....

[Dawn]

Deep feelings, expressed so strongly. Thanks for sharing your great work.

[Maryem Sumyta]

Glad you liked it... thank u

[AaronFreitas]

This is a great write my friend... really enjoyed it :)

[Maryem Sumyta]

Thanks a lot.... :)

[Warren Daniel II]

Wow, such a deep poem, reading this past ( present but well hidden) emotions in me were being stirred up and I feel the exact way about love, where the world is promised but all that is taken aways just cause of a little storm. This is a great read excellently written.

[Maryem Sumyta]

Thank you :)

[Ashraf Farid]

'I hate love....' means the very nxt time u r gonna love 'love'

[Saravanan Evu]

" Hate My Life " - I like this much!

[Maryem Sumyta]

Thank you Saravanan.. :)