Get to work Cupid

Get to work Cupid

A Poem by Mary Helda
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Cupid seems to be taking his time,if this doesnt wake him up then i dont know what will

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Alas! Cupid 
Slothefulness doesn't suit you 
Do something;will you? 
Pursue the universe 
To find my soulmate 
Lose yourself if you must 
Valentine's comes and goes as he pleases 
He is bored with my singleness 
What now Cupid? 
Your arrow must be bitter 
I'll write you a honeyed haiku 
I'll write you a sweet sonnet 
To replenish your magic 
Then you'll find love for me

© 2017 Mary Helda


Author's Note

Mary Helda
Thank you:-)

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Poignant, sad and uplifting at the same time... You express yourself elegantly. Your terms are clear and your meanings crisp. You paint a picture with your words that is easily visible and easy to follow. You berate with one hand and reward with the other; like a slap followed by a kiss... Excellent form. The only thing you need to work on is your technical form. Example: Do something,will you? Correction: Do something; will you?
This is not a criticism, merely an observation.
All of us must live and grow or we would not be here. This is truly a heartfelt and beautiful work.
I look forward to reading more of your works. wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Ohh!!what a wonderful review...did put a smile on my face...thank you so much...I am going to edit t.. read more



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If only Cupid could be bribed into finding everyone's perfect match. How honest this poem is....a passionate plea to Cupid. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lydi
I did enjoy this poem dear Mary.
"I'll write you a honeyed haiku
I'll write you a sweet sonnet
To refuel your magic
Then you'll find love for me "
I liked the wish and the poem for help. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
/I'll write you a honeyed haiku
I'll write you a sweet sonnet/

Haha - he is waiting for that poetry!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

hahaha,i'll get it to him as soon as i can
I love this poem, and I know the feeling as well. Let's hope Cupid reads this, and gets off his lazy bum to get to work for you :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

I am sure ge will,thank you my dear
A lovely sweet write Mary how dare cupid over look you!! Its an arrow worth waiting!:):)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much...it definately is:-)

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Added on February 13, 2016
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Mary Helda
Mary Helda

Kampala, Christian, Uganda



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