Portrait of mother

feeling alittle sad

"I love you," you echoed;

With a mellifluous voice

That is tautly bound to my heart-

It still lingers in my mind,

So magical

So real

So soft

So pure

your voice ; those words-

My treasure

My Portrait of you.

Author's Note

I didnt exactly intend to write down a powerful poem,just the way i am feeling in very few words

Reviews

[Solar]

/"I love you," you echoed;

With a mellifluous voice

That is tautly bound to my heart-

It still lingers in my mind/

the mother echoes the child's love - how sweet like honey - and that memory has a strength to bind the heart to such a loving and lovingly shared memory!

[Mary Helda]

Thank you so much..i really do appreciate it:-)

[Solar]

You are welcome!

[mou]

The place of mother and father in heart ,is really tough to write on a paper..sorry that you are missing your mother..every sorrow memory leaves us with depression but except of parents..because even their memories give us strength and support ,,may be due to their purest ,never ending love for us which we can never find in this world after..
it is just heart touching ,Mary..

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing words for dear mother.
"your voice ; those words-
My treasure
My Portrait of you. "
The description soft and powerful. Thank you Mary for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mary Helda]

thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Mary.

[Érenn]

Such intense emotions, such a powerful poem, this is a truly wonderful poem. I felt your pain, even if it's slight and to bear such love for your loved ones is truly a testament to love itself.

[Mary Helda]

Thank you my darling:-)

[Lydia Shutter]

The emotions in this one are intense. I can feel your sadness. I am sorry you are missing your mom.....I know how that feels. Lydi**

[Mary Helda]

Its okay,it'll get better with time..thank you so much for your kind words..i really do sppreciate it

[Bear]

Powerful indeed, I couldn't think of a better testament to motherhood than what you have written here. This is the kind of poem I would like to see on a mothers day card, Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Mary Helda]

Oh my!!!! thank you so much,you are too kind...i really do appreciate it

[Frank]

Pretty sure I'm going to like all of your poetry
Tight, neat, powerful. Perfect.

[Mary Helda]

Thank you...i really appreciate it

[CiNtsaLis]

*hearts drops* This melts me entirely! this is so beautiful! it's like it's forever frozen D: *exhales* It's beyong gorgeous darling. *covers mouth*

[CiNtsaLis]

*beyond* (chuckles*) Is there a DELETE option? *laughs* (hides from embarrassment) >.< Oh no, it pressed enter! *covers face*

[Mary Helda]

hahahaha *laughs*..there is no delete button but we could enter "beyong* in our secret dictionary..dont be embarassed.. you are so funny and sweet..thank you darling

[Mary Helda]

hahaha...most definately:-):-)

[Great Aunt Astri]

AHHH. It is sad when loved ones pass on. I had to look up the word, 'mellifluous'. What a lovely word ... clever you!

[Mary Helda]

thank you:-)..i like learning new,words too

[jacob erin-cilberto]

for me it is powerful...lost my mother over a year and a half ago---that final portrait---in my mind always stayed young.

[Mary Helda]

i am sorry about your loss.........and i am glad you have a clear portrait of her.. ..i have one of mine too...thank you:-)

[CiNtsaLis]

😱😨🤔 one secret dictionary coming right up 😁😊 "beyong" another word for hidden beauty 😊 another word for butterfly. 😁