His eyes (10w)

sometimes a look is enough to set you on fire

Dark smoldering eyes-
caressed me
and rode me to
Ecstacy....

Author's Note

thank you:-)

Reviews

[jesserose99]

eyes that pulled you in, that you can drown in their depth i imagine if you get too lost, you will not be able to find your way out. eyes you can go on and on about, just from your words right here. see you have inspired me. simple to the point, and intriguing.

we all want to look into those eyes, but be careful, because you might get burned.

[Mary Helda]

well i will try to be careful...thank you:-)

[Érenn]

One look can change everything. One look at it and I am like what a poem! Yeah this an awesome piece and yeah that guy's good ^.~

[Mary Helda]

Hahaa..yeah..thank you:-)

[SuspectGray]

Now I'm jealous....maybe I need contacts

[Mary Helda]

hahahaha,it depends,what colour are your eyes?

[SuspectGray]

green eyes and yours?

[Mary Helda]

ahhh,green eyes,well then you have no reason to be jealous,you dont need contacts:-):-):-)...mine are black and brown..sometimes they are brown and sometimes black

[Jennifer Shaw]

Short, sweet, and to the point. Powerful feelings expressed in just a few words! It's very lovely. ^_^

[Mary Helda]

Thank you:-)

[Deanna M.]

Wow, this poem is very short but proves that one look can change everything. You depicted that very well!!

[Mary Helda]

thank you so much

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice personification appears here....

[Mary Helda]

Thank you sir:-)

[Willard Wells]

You will possible at some time find how much I like short verse. And you hit one out of the park with this one. Very well done. And with so few words and very subtle erotica. Nice.

[Mary Helda]

Why..thank you:-)...and from your pieces,i can tell you love short verse. i believe they carry so much meaning

[Krizito]

The eyes that make and mar..BEWARE. Nice!

[Mary Helda]

i will be....thank you dear poet:-)

[maria ( rose)]

wow ! eyes are windows to the soul,-very well penned.

[Mary Helda]

thank you sweetheart:-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Those eyes can steal our heart and dreams. A outstanding poem dear Poet.
Coyote

[Mary Helda]

thank you sir:-)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.