WINDOW OF MY SOUL

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WINDOW OF MY SOUL


window of my soul
for so long
framed by illusion
today I lean over
in this imaginary ledge
observing my life passing by
sensing a change
intense and beautiful

a sweet wind
that swings the curtains
of my being

window of my soul

I don’t want sad landscapes
today I don’t want a rain
that doesn’t go away
I don’t want that pain
that doesn’t subside
today I want so much
to be an imaginary artist
of my destiny
grasp the brushes of my tenderness
my colors of love

and paint a landscape

without any bitterness
window of my soul

I wish this landscape

to be full of flowers
full of colors

and eternal

 

Mary Fioratti

 

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yet more beauty flowing from your eyes upon the virgin page. This has a sweet quality and a self discovery element to it but it feels like someone becoming content in their own skin.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow I love how this piece comes together for me it’s a description of the inner soul wants and needs to be for filed to feel whole nevertheless it is beautifully written.

[TawnyBlueStar]

this is really lovely :D
I like the repetition of "window of my soul". like looking more closely to inner feelings or dreams :) "I wish this landscape to be full of flowers full of colors and eternal" - that is a great ending
love it :D

[Hayley]

Superb work! I love the style, the painting, the verbiage. The beginning and the ending framed this poem to perfection. I absolutely love it!

[Tate Morgan]

today I want so much
to be an imaginary artist
of my destiny
This tells the truth of the write .I think you have reached a turning point .We all do this come to the crossroads every once in a while to change the direction of our life .And forever will it influence our descendants from then on.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lovely presentation, Mary! The graphic is gorgeous and marries perfectly with your poetic observation of "life passing by".

"today I want so much
to be an imaginary artist
of my destiny
grasp the brushes of my tenderness
my colors of love
and paint a landscape"

I look forward to reading more.

My best,
Kelly

[WhiteWillow]

Happiness is a choice, a choice not easily made all of the time. I feel the frustration in your words; the desire is there, and acceptance will make it so. A beautiful piece.

[An owl on the moon]

A beautiful, lifting song of the soul... filled with a gentle courage to face the world with a wonder and joy that is often stolen by the rains and storms surrounding us... Yes, artists of our destiny... may it be.. may it be.

[emmajoy]

' I wish this landscape ~ to be full of flowers ~ full of colors ~ and eternal ' .. those last four lines are the perfect ending to a beautiful piece of writing. I'm left with a sense of calm and hope and the feeling that dreams can come true!

[Muse]

Favorited. I'm speechless....not many poets leave me speechless, but you did exactly that. This spoke to me on a very personal level. A writers soul is like an empty canvas I think. We can paint both our fantasy and reality. Your colors shine like a rainbow in this writing....simply gorgeous. 100/100