Pain is like a whip

Eyes don't fade
impressions
hiding , maybe.
Left to the wind
over and under
wonders never
cease to amaze
the Heart
the Mind
No matter what
inflammatory as
I am ... still I
leave imprints on your
Heart...
Hurt
is the biggest part
Pain is like a whip
every-time I
get strong
I slip,
like a knot.
It can suffocate
or
invigorate
Let me be...
your knot
come see
how easily
I can tie
you
into ...me~!
Come
on and ...see.

Reviews

[Lauriegirl]

Your pieces always have a unique flair and a cool creative style. Good job

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I really like this piece and its sentiment too. Good writing

[Blake Fodor]

Wow! This is a delightful read and a truly powerful journey. Well done indeed here

[K Scott Smith]

This is so beautifully expressed and wonderfully written

[Kelly Scheppers]

...it is very much like a whip, never ceasing to remind us where it hurts the most.

[ba_mcfarlane]

This is cutting, relentless in the pain...wow.

[Harmony-Lee]

Pain is like a whip
every-time I
get strong
I slip,
like a knot.
It can suffocate
or
invigorate

My favorite bit - great piece - made my mind spin.

[Matching Socks]

This poems leaves a bit of a sting. Love the ending, for indeed live does bind two people together.

[John Anderson]

Great attention to detail and vivid imagery help make this a wonderful poem. Well done