Pain is like a whip

Eyes don't fade
impressions
hiding , maybe.
Left to the wind
over and under
wonders never
cease to amaze
the Heart
the Mind
No matter what
inflammatory as
I am ... still I
leave imprints on your
Heart...
Hurt
is the biggest part
Pain is like a whip
every-time I
get strong
I slip,
like a knot.
It can suffocate
or
invigorate
Let me be...
your knot
come see
how easily
I can tie
you
into ...me~!
Come
on and ...see.

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Such a well written piece Has great meaning.

[Rene Velez]

love the flow of it, its racing style, great work Mary.

[shruthi]

Beautifully written...
pain is the most terrible thing to experience....
It's short but i really loved reading it....

[Linda alexander]

wonders never
cease to amaze
the Heart
Well penned, great footage on real world, impressed

[Ashira Macy]

Brilliantly written dear, with such a wonderful premise.

[Patrick]

This is heartfelt, and I appreciate that about you.

[Mary C]

This piece really got to me, I must say. I found this to be completely enthralling. Very good job my friend!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

The title says it all with your poem.

Creative views and connections to your subject.

[Wandering Minstrel]

You write so beautifully and I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

[Rikita Singleton]

This poem is very good and creative, I love your style of writing. pain is like a whip, and love does tie two people together. I really enjoyed the poem.