Yes

and so i closed my mind
from the piney needles
adorned and adored
and mightily so
though...
the scent
had turned to sol....soul rubbing..

one against other so as to lose
no
to shine lustre each their own other
beauty
yes

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Lovely thoughts here mary a wonder to have read.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Ending with the title and making the reader think along the way.

[SingPoetically]

This is a nicely thought provoking piece......Smiles

[Anne Timmins]

this is such a beautifully and cleverly done write

[Susan Beth Horvath]

This is a great job you have done here with this. Bravo

[ba_mcfarlane]

What effortless and mystic phrasing...one of your best!

[Mary C]

There is something about this write that just leaps off of the page with brilliance!! Bravo

[John Anderson]

A unique and beautifully expressed poem. Amazing work

[Linda alexander]

to shine lustre each their own other
beauty
A beautiful well penned poem with a message

[Blake Fodor]

This is a very very good piece.