I Leave Imprints On Your Heart

Hearts don't fade
impressions
hiding , maybe.
Left to the wind
over and under
wonders never
cease to amaze
the Heart
the Mind
No matter what
inflammatory as
I am ... still I
leave imprints on your
Heart...
Hurt
is the biggest part
Pain is like a whip
every time I
get strong
I slip,
like a knot.
It can suffocate
or
invigorate
Let me be...
your knot
come see
how easily
I can tie
you
into ...me~!
Come
on and ...see.

Reviews

[Anne Timmins]

I adore this one - it speaks to my soul - - a brilliant piece.

[Me]

Your way with words floats each line into a stunning array of phrasing - another gem which was a pleasure to read

[Blake Fodor]

Loud Applause.
Such an endearing and honest write

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Unique writing in structure and words, and sounds like a challenge.
Will your heart survive if someone calls you out?

[Briana O'Connor]

I like the unique structure of this poem. The emotions clear and vivid. I can imagine the pain and the triumph. Thank you for sharing and please return the favor by reviewing one of my pieces.

[bob, small b. aka invs]

it's odd how a love poem can be so overwhelmingly negative. it makes one wonder what the attraction would be.

[John Anderson]

This is really beautifully expressed and so very romantic. Simply elegant! A praiseworthy poem