I Leave Imprints On Your Heart

Hearts don't fade
impressions
hiding , maybe.
Left to the wind
over and under
wonders never
cease to amaze
the Heart
the Mind
No matter what
inflammatory as
I am ... still I
leave imprints on your
Heart...
Hurt
is the biggest part
Pain is like a whip
every time I
get strong
I slip,
like a knot.
It can suffocate
or
invigorate
Let me be...
your knot
come see
how easily
I can tie
you
into ...me~!
Come
on and ...see.

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Give me your best slip not and we'll wait and see if you come and set me free. Blessings to you.

[Dindella]

Very interesting set-up for this one. I like how the words seem to fall and climb down like a broken ladder. It fits the mood set and the eyes follow it with piqued interest.

[RAOrourke]

still I
leave imprints on your
Heart...
Hurt
is the biggest part
....wonderfully descriptive and descriptive of life and others imprints they make on our lives.

[Ashira Macy]

Wonderfully penned dear, your words were glowing. We all leave imprints on each other, though some are deeper than others.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

so beautiful so true for better or worse.



Pain is like a whip
every time I
get strong
I slip,
like a knot.
It can suffocate
or
invigorate
Let me be...
your knot
come see
how easily
I can tie
you
into ...me~!
Come
on and ...see.




Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful piece.
For better or worse, when we find that 'one' we are bound by love.

[Rene Velez]

Love the wordplay and content. An enticing write indeed. Well done Mary.

[Wandering Minstrel]

Fabulously lush language! This is cosmic in quality! The imagery and rhythm is very moving

[Susan Beth Horvath]

the descriptive words that you have selected to share within this piece so easily paint a beautiful vision

[ba_mcfarlane]

This is the ride of complete and passionate and romantic love. It shivered down my spine, and my heart rose into my throat, like I was free falling down that weightless drop on a roller coaster. Bravo!!