No

No

A Poem by burnhouse

after everything you said - 
everything you've told me
tears are all that's left
once again
you aren't here to hold me

you never really were

how am I supposed
to trust people
to let them rip my heart in two
(or even more pieces)
- wish it was more closed

it never really was

I
act like I forgot
the dimple on your cheek;
that I saw 
when I was lucky enough to see you smile

I
act like I forgot
the curve of your lips;
that I felt
when I was lucky enough to kiss them

I
act like I forgot

but

I never really did.

© 2013 burnhouse


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The heart has a memory of its own and it is irrespective of the pragmatic memory of the mind...so sad. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Thankies. :)
Excellent poem. The way that you wrote it really pulled me in. Around the middle I had the thought, "The narrator is acting like she's forgetting but it seems like she can't." Then I read the ending and I smirked.

Very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Hahaha, thank you. :)
I want to read more of your work..beautiful piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Means a lot. :)
That's a very good poem. Sad and heartfelt, that conveys a lot of emotions. It totally touched me.
Well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :3
annabellee

11 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
powerful words a lot of feeling behind them thanks for sharing this I can relate to the feeling in them

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. And no problem. :)

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Added on October 7, 2013
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