Wondering

Wondering

A Poem by burnhouse

do you

do you ever, ever wonder;
why do leaves fall 
why the nice things fade away
why we sometimes
lose our way

do you ever, ever wonder;
why do flowers die
why does a mother cry
why 

do you ever, ever wonder;
why are clouds grey at times
why does the sun 
shine less

when everything seems like a big lie

© 2013 burnhouse


Author's Note

burnhouse
I have no idea. I usually don't ever write poetry.

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nice one, keep it going :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Thanks, will do. :3
Lovely poem..heartfeeling..left me wondering

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Aww, thanks.
I do wonder about all these things, too sometimes.
Nice poem, it has a very good flow.
considering that you usually don't write poetry, it's really really good. you're a natural.
Well penned :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Thank you for this review. :) My mind just bursted with inspiration last night.
annabellee

11 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
There is a lovely flow to this piece, Mary. And alas, I wonder all the time.

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Thank you. Knew someone would understand. :)
you don't write poetry but it seems to be flowing out then jusst let it happen I like your poems they have a lot of feeling

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Zach. And yes, it was just like flowing out yesterday. Which was really weird for me.
Aww... I love it. It's awesome, and I can't wait to read more of your poems. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Oh, thank you, Danica. :3
Danica

11 Years Ago

Your Welcome!!!!!!
Don't ever wonder, just accept it I guess. Nice poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Not all those who wonder are lost. :) Thank you.
Zach Knox

11 Years Ago

Tolkien :P
burnhouse

11 Years Ago

Yes. :3 But God, I wrote 'wonder' istead 'wander'. ._.

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