Never Neverland

I have been to Neverland and back
I went over the bridge and past the tracks
I followed my heart to fun and games
And decided that I needed some fame
I played the games with morbid pirates 
I had Tinkerbell as my everlasting guidance 
She is a bright little thing, oh yes she is
She tends to fly by as quick whiz 
She sprinkles children with picksy dust
She keeps them young as she earns their trust
I am not sorry to say that I am going back
I am now a resident there I will not unpack
If you want to find me you must fly over the bridge
Through the fireflies and gall midge
They won't bite you don't worry about that
Just fly over the bridge and past the tracks

Author's Note

I sometimes write for children

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This is one of those places that children dream about. I was inspired to write this gift song-poem for you to keep as your own: It’s in seven syllable 1/0/1/0/1/0/1 with “1” an accent and “0” a non-accent to make it sing:

Neverland

O’er the bridge and pass the tracks
on our way to Neverland,
there’s a place where nothing lacks,
a gem studded golden strand.

We’ll fill sacks upon our backs
with gifts from this Wonderland.
We’ll eat snacks from candy shacks
as we travel hand-in-hand.

[Honey-Bee]

Wow! That is such a cool poem and a sweet compliment on my poem too. Thanks for sharing a poem to compliment mine. What a nice gesture!

[just Penny]

I see in your author note that you sometimes write for children. This is delightful and certainly brings out the inner child in me. Great rhyming and a nice story. Penny

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Penny!

[Sami Khalil]

Children and even adults will love this write. Bravo...............

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..................

[Chris Micha]

As a fan of Peter Pan I have love for this poem. I love the imagery here and the magical elements it posesses.

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Christian! I too have always been a fan of Peter Pan. I also have a love for magical fun!

[Chris Micha]

Yes! I will agree :)

[Fenix Flight]

this is Beautiful! simply beautiful

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Fenix

[redzone]

You also write for us kids who still think they are 6. Like me .. ;0)

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks redzone!

[StrixNebulosa]

Sweet and simple... a lovely light story poem. I know children will love it and some adults too...

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks StrixNeblosa