skating on ice

i loved you cold-
     ice skating across lakes

my feet flew
  grappled for balance

when i went down
  you fell too
       and blanketed me

  i adored your lips
  and the way a rise
  of clouded air
    escaped

hovered near my face
    and released
        a thousand small cravings

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Lovely Work!

[Groovy]

Great write

[Chris]

I like the little things noticed and remembered...
reality is like that...

[Kim]

This is such a beuatiful write, I liked this. it's moving!

[Coyote Poetry]

Always a good day to be someone you love on a cold Winter day with free time and skating. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Leon R]

I don't like skating but reading that somehow made me willing to go and skate now :)
Excellent write, as usual!!!

[TawnyBlueStar]

wow
this is lovely :) I like the fourth stanza :D

[Me]

This is an amazing, beautiful poem