grape, orange and cherry

On thick legs and spineless disposition, she balances choices. 

Sometime between a steak supper
and CanadaAM in the morning, 
she measures  worth on bathroom scale 
and merit in inches. 

Her potential lay crystallized, 
beneath microwaveable dinners, 
and Popsicle in three flavours 

exactly two more 
than she has options

Reviews

[AJ Kristiansen]

Yes Mary you certainly have a way with words and you somehow seem to balance your ideas in a way that gives us enough information to taste the idea you're presenting without too much detail to be completely obvious... I like it a lot... very thought provoking! :) Great write!

[DaveM]

Here I see expressed her attachment to herself as a body, her as a spirit lies dormant and out of sight.
Is this what you wished to say?
Dave

[Mauricio Montoya]

something to ponder.

[The Winter Grey]

Very interestingly put, and surprisingly heartbreaking. Well done.

[Me]

Most compelling and well written

[Thea]

This is a truly great poem!
Very brilliantly written in such ways...
:)))

[Hachamecha]

it makes me think, really. :) Great write

[~ Stefanie ~]

This was really good! It caused me to think :)

[paradise]

Love this reminds me of myself sadly but i really enjoyed it welll done :)