slow circles

slow circles

A Poem by Mary C

fingertips trace
            slow circles on his temples
           i gaze down
          barely whisper-
                      
                   "god...     i love your mouth"

he pauses
       searches my hooded eyes
                  
                  
     "i meant it...     you know?
          
            - i'd move   heaven and earth for you"
  

my back arches involuntarily
                  
                        " you already are..."

© 2011 Mary C


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Excellent write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are a great writer. So few words create a amazing poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem. I like the ending a lot.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great Job! Loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Lovely write

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Mary C
Mary C

London, Ontario, Canada



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A simple woman, getting older and hopefully wiser. 4 lovely kids, two sons, two daughters. Like to write, paint and play music...that is all I can think of for now :-) This is the story of my jour.. more..

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