slow circles
A Poem by
Mary C
fingertips trace
slow circles on his temples
i gaze down
barely whisper-
"god... i love your mouth"
he pauses
searches my hooded eyes
"i meant it... you know?
- i'd move heaven and earth for you"
my back arches involuntarily
" you already are..."
© 2011 Mary C
Reviews
Excellent write.
Posted 12 Years Ago
You are a great writer. So few words create a amazing poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem. I like the ending a lot.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
You are a great writer. So few words create a amazing poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem. I like the ending a lot.
Coyote
Great Job! Loved it.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Great Job! Loved it.
Lovely write
Posted 12 Years Ago
Lovely write
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Added on December 2, 2011
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Mary C London, Ontario, Canada
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A simple woman, getting older and hopefully wiser. 4 lovely kids, two sons, two daughters. Like to write, paint and play music...that is all I can think of for now :-)
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